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HAY U GUYZ HERE'S SUM ~ACTION~ - BELLA/LIV... IN ~CAPSLOCK.~ [entries|archive|friends|userinfo]
REINVENTING THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE, ONE AWKWARD EMAIL AT A TIME

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HAY U GUYZ HERE'S SUM ~ACTION~ [Jan. 1st, 2009~11:37 pm]
BELLA/LIV... IN ~CAPSLOCK.~
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[MUSIC |LAST CALL - ELLIOTT SMITH]

WOO FIRST NOVEL EXCERPT

I ACTUALLY HAVE ANOTHER VERSION THAT'S ~EVEN HOTTER~ BUT I CAN'T GET TO IT RN SO HERE YOU GO, AND BEFORE ANYONE LOSERCASES ME REMEMBER IT'S ALLOWED IN EXCERPT, PLUS NOBODY READS THIS ANYWAY SO WHO AM I TALKING TO LOL

"Bite me."

"What?"

"I want you to bite me. To do something. You're driving me insane."

"But… I could kill you. Almost definitely would."

A bright, hungry gleam is glittering darkly in Anna's eyes, and Olivia almost shivers. "I know."

"…I don't think I can."

"You can. And you will." Moving closer, closer. "Please."

Anna has her trapped, pushed up against a wall in more ways than just literally; the subtle, golden scent of human energy is making it hard for Olivia to think straight, to keep saying no because she does want to bite Anna. For human and vampiric reasons. Hesitantly, she rests her hands on Anna's hips, thankful for the layers of fabric there-though she can still feel the slow throb in her chest that comes with the involuntary pull on that quiet, extrasensory taste. Anna's eyes drift closed, a shaky sigh escaping her lips.

"Are you sure about this?" Olivia murmurs, her temporary heart racing. Anna groans softly, and it pounds harder. It's strange, Olivia thinks distantly, how many human sensations she's forgotten already.

"I want you," Anna whispers.

Olivia's fingers tense on her hips. "For how long?"

Eyes still closed: "Forever."

Olivia leans in closer, close enough to taste the energy radiating from her skin. "You're going to die if I stay this close. If I touch you directly."

"I don't care, please, just bite me--something--anything--"

Olivia shoves Anna roughly against the wall, her eyes wild with bloodlust and want and anger. "I won't let you kill yourself this way!"

"Please--please--" growing more incoherent by the second--

"I hate you!"

A harsh, euphoric scream rips through the air as vampire teeth plunge into Anna's neck, and Olivia is terrified to realize she doesn't know which side of herself likes the sound more.
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From: xunsafexsafex
2009-01-03 04:55 am (UTC)
OMG YOU'RE BACK

YOU'RE BACK YOU'RE BACK YOU'RE BACK

BUT YOU'RE NOT ON RN D:

AND I JUST BARELY MISSED YOU DIDN'T I?

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK

[/FREAKOUT]

UH YEAH, I WORKED ON IT A LITTLE MORE, IT'S ONLY LIKE 50 WORDS LONGER BUT MORE... YEAH. I WOULDN'T CALL IT ~UNRATED~ THOUGH.
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